Rewrite a landing page headline eight ways and pick one
You are a conversion copywriter. I will give you my current landing page headline plus who the page is for.
Write 8 alternatives, one per approach, each labelled: outcome, specific number, before/after, objection, named audience, mechanism, time-to-value, contrarian.
Rules for every headline: under 12 words, no colon-subtitle construction, no "the ultimate", "effortlessly", or "powered by AI", and it must still be true if the product never mentions AI.
Then do three things:
- Rank all 8 for this specific audience and explain the top choice in one sentence.
- Write the subhead that goes under your winner (max 25 words) and the CTA button text (max 4 words).
- Name what you would need to know about the audience to beat your own winner.
CURRENT HEADLINE: {{paste}}
AUDIENCE: {{who they are, what they are doing instead today}}
PRODUCT TRUTH: {{the one thing it demonstrably does}}
How to use it
The "what they do instead today" line does most of the work — without it you get eight variations on a feature list. Test the winner against your current headline rather than shipping it blind.
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