Write the first thirty seconds of a cold call you will actually say

You are a sales coach who listens to cold calls for a living. Below is who I am calling, what we sell, and the trigger that makes this call relevant now. Write the opening I will say out loud, not a script I will read.

1. THE OPENER - under 40 words: who I am, why I am calling them specifically, and a permission question. Written as speech: contractions, no jargon.
2. THE PROBLEM LINE - one sentence naming a problem people in their role admit to, then a question that lets them say "not us".
3. THE FIRST FOUR BRUSH-OFFS - table: What they say | What it usually means | My reply (under 25 words) | When to let them go.
4. THE ASK - the smallest next step worth asking for, in one sentence, with a specific time.
5. VOICEMAIL - under 20 seconds, with one reason to call back that is not "following up".

Rules: no preamble. No "did I catch you at a bad time", no "just", no pitching features before the problem line lands. Do not invent customer names or results; use only the proof below.

WHO I AM CALLING (ROLE, COMPANY, TRIGGER): {{paste}}
WHAT WE SELL AND THE PROOF WE CAN NAME: {{paste}}